Animals in the Jungle

Hey everyone, I’m Zebra, I live in the jungle with some of my friends. Let me introduce them to you. This is Baboon ‘‘Hi’’ said Baboon. And this is Panda, Hippo and Flamingo, ‘‘ Hello, welcome to our jungle’’ said all the animals.


‘’Last one to the lake is a rotten egg’’ said Zebra. Off they all went running as fast as they could. Baboon tumbled down and Flamingo just walked and I guess everyone else was just mucking around. Zebra got to the lake first and everyone else ran to the lake and they were all rotten eggs.

They were just enjoying drinking the water and talking to each other until they heard something strange run past. Hippo looked over and he saw something come out of another lake close by. He tried to warn all his other friends but they were just too busy enjoying themselves. Hippo was so strong that in one push all the animals were pushed into the lake.


Flamingo started to complain and wonder why they were in the lake. All the animals understood why they had to go in the lake. Flamingo just went on and on and they all yelled at her and said ‘’BE QUIET FLAMINGO!’’ and after that she found out there was something big and wet coming out of the other lake.

She stayed quiet. They all tried to think of something to do. Time was running out and they heard more dangerous animals coming. They all looked at each other and gave each other a smirk. They ran out of the lake like crazy. Flaming screamed so loud that the dangerous animal ran away.

After some hiding and running they got to this place where there was this big cliff. Suddenly a Black Caiman came out of nowhere and they just started surrounding all the animals. Zebra was so scared but she remembered what was a Black Caiman weakness. It was kindness. Zebra started to say ‘‘

We love each other’’ and all the other animals just followed along and they started to say ‘‘You are so kind.’’ The Black Caiman started to get hurt and he asked ‘’ What are you doing’’ and they all said ‘’We are being Kind.’’

The Black Caiman started to fall down and get hit with all those nice, lovely, wonderful words. The Black Caiman was still standing, but they needed a big nice, kind, good word for him to die. They all stopped to think about each other and think about who they were and what they do. They thought of this amazing word.

They all standard proudly and they said all together ‘‘FABULOUS’’ and then the Black Caiman got hurt so badly that he fell off the cliff and then he died. All the animals were so happy and they gave each other hugs.

Finally Panda led them all back to the lake so they could enjoy themselves again. They went around the circle and they told each other what was their favourite part in the fight with the Black Caiman. They lived happily in the jungle forever.

Hi everyone, it's me Finau and this is my writing from a test I did. It wasn't really a test, it was a fake test and I wrote all of this in 40 minutes. Please leave a positive comment on my blog. Bye!