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Monday, 20 July 2020

Making my writing better


Hello everyone, it's me Finu and today I'm talking about my writing. So I really like writing, but I still need to improve and do better. I had some help from my teacher Mr Hughes. He is a friend of my teacher Miss Parrant. He taught us how not to start sentence with but or and or because. He was teaching us what type of sentences are there. I learnt some much. Here's a pargh from my writing that I fixed. Hope you like it. Please leave a positive comment on my blog. Bye!

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