Hi everyone, it's me Finau and today I'm gonna be doing another activity for the SLJ. This is y tenth activity I've done this week. We had to write our own Haiku Poems about summer. I thought this activity was a great idea. I had to so much fun doing it. I hope you enjoy my poem. Please leave a positive comment on my blog. Bye!
Hello Finau, Nita here !
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your haiku poem a lot because it gave me the summer chills/vibes. Your poem clearly expresses/defines a lot about summer. Its great knowing you enjoyed this activity too. Keep up the great work !!
Whats your favorite season?
Nita
Hello Nita (again)!
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog again. I just love it when people leave me a comment. I'm also glad that you love my Haiku Poem and the reason. True that, love the summer chills and vibes. I actually love all the seasons but I really love Spring. Thanks again Nita.
From Finau!
Hi Finau,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Joanna from Glen Taylor School, I enjoyed reading your haiku poem, it's really cool.
Hey Joanna!
DeleteSo glad that you like reading my Summer Haiku poems. I also checked out you ones and left a comment. Hope you reply.
From Finau:)
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Finau, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteTauke! Awesome! Thank you for taking the time to participate in the haiku activity. Is swimming something you might be doing a lot of over this summer holiday?
Poetry doesn’t actually have rules and lots of poets have played with the rules of haikus. But the limitations can help us have to think creatively to say what we want in as few words as we can. I think what you've done is really good but I reckon for an extra challenge you could try working on this one again and work on that 5,7,5 syllable and see what creativity comes out of having to work to the limitations.
I’ll be really excited to see if you do,
Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino
Hi Kiana-Marino!
DeleteThank you so much for commenting on my blog. Swimming is something we would always ask our parents and this weekend we are gonna have a slip'n slide and play. I will maybe try again in the Haiku poems. It was my first time doing it so yeah. Thanks again Kiana-Marino!
From Finau:)